Here I provide an introduction in my life-choice memoir assignment and links to the relevant blog post that serve as part of my writing process
When I have to write, it's imperative that I'm in a peaceful surrounding, I cannot think very clearly when I am stressed or being bothered, I'ts easiest for me to Write when I'm relaxed, It's easier for me to create vivid, and entertaining scenes. When I reviewed my first draft I was able to find a a significant amount of areas that could use some editing, or all around changing. When you compare my first Draft to my second Draft the story seems to come to life, I feel as if I was able to get my point across to the leader in a much more powerful way, and a way that the ready really can understand the struggle, and maybe even connect to me as the writer. I also was able to show the difference in time, and make the story a little less confusing just by restructuring my pages.
When writing Circles, I had to find relate to some of my blog post for inspiration, and blogs that helped me complete my work, even though I used all of my blogs to create Circles, the blogs that helped me the most, were LIFE-CHOICE MEMOIR REFLECTION, LIFE-CHOICE MEMOIR REFLECTION, LIFE CHOICE: SHOULD I STAY OR SHOULD I GO?. These blogs were the most helpful because they all dealt, with my life choices. They all encouraged me to right and revise my work, to create my Final Edition of Circles.
After brewing up ideas for a couple of weeks, I returned to Circles, to create my Final Edition When returning back to Circles I deleted some of my boring and unnecessary areas, and added some more entertaining scenes. The new scenes that were added really drive in on the focus of my paper. It gives the reader a much better idea of why I wrote about the topic of being in a rut and going in Circles, and showing how anyone can overcome this rut with enough dedication.
Here are the links to my first draft, to the final edition of my story Circles.
When I have to write, it's imperative that I'm in a peaceful surrounding, I cannot think very clearly when I am stressed or being bothered, I'ts easiest for me to Write when I'm relaxed, It's easier for me to create vivid, and entertaining scenes. When I reviewed my first draft I was able to find a a significant amount of areas that could use some editing, or all around changing. When you compare my first Draft to my second Draft the story seems to come to life, I feel as if I was able to get my point across to the leader in a much more powerful way, and a way that the ready really can understand the struggle, and maybe even connect to me as the writer. I also was able to show the difference in time, and make the story a little less confusing just by restructuring my pages.
When writing Circles, I had to find relate to some of my blog post for inspiration, and blogs that helped me complete my work, even though I used all of my blogs to create Circles, the blogs that helped me the most, were LIFE-CHOICE MEMOIR REFLECTION, LIFE-CHOICE MEMOIR REFLECTION, LIFE CHOICE: SHOULD I STAY OR SHOULD I GO?. These blogs were the most helpful because they all dealt, with my life choices. They all encouraged me to right and revise my work, to create my Final Edition of Circles.
After brewing up ideas for a couple of weeks, I returned to Circles, to create my Final Edition When returning back to Circles I deleted some of my boring and unnecessary areas, and added some more entertaining scenes. The new scenes that were added really drive in on the focus of my paper. It gives the reader a much better idea of why I wrote about the topic of being in a rut and going in Circles, and showing how anyone can overcome this rut with enough dedication.
Here are the links to my first draft, to the final edition of my story Circles.
- "Circles" Final Edition
- "Circles" Draft 2
- "Untitled" Draft 1